Re: [CCAMP] Adam Roach's No Objection on draft-ietf-ccamp-microwave-framework-06: (with COMMENT)

"Yemin (Amy)" <amy.yemin@huawei.com> Mon, 28 May 2018 07:41 UTC

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Subject: Re: [CCAMP] Adam Roach's No Objection on draft-ietf-ccamp-microwave-framework-06: (with COMMENT)
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Hi Adam,



Thanks for the comments, and sorry for the late response.

Please see reply inline in blue.



BR,

Amy



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Subject: Adam Roach's No Objection on draft-ietf-ccamp-microwave-framework-06: (with COMMENT)



Adam Roach has entered the following ballot position for

draft-ietf-ccamp-microwave-framework-06: No Objection



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COMMENT:

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I appreciate all the work that went into creating this requirements document.



I agree with the several other comments regarding the archival value of this document. Generally, I don't object to the publication of support documents that were established by a working group charter prior to the publication of https://www.ietf.org/iesg/statement/support-documents-in-ietf-wgs.html

or those that were explicitly discussed as part of a chartering/rechartering.

I cannot find mention of a framework and/or requirements document for and millimeter wave interfaces in the CCAMP charter. I concur with the suggestions to use some other means (e.g., a wiki) to provide easy access to this information while the corresponding YANG work is performed.



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Abstract:



Please expand the acronym "ETH".
[Amy] will fix it.

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§3:



>  It's noted that

>  there's idea that the NMS and SDN are evolving towards a component,

> and the distinction between them is quite vague.



Nit: "...there's an idea..."

                 ^^


[Amy] After discussion in the list, the new proposed text here is "Possible approaches
   include via the use of a network management system (NMS), via software defined
   networking (SDN) and via some combination of NMS and SDN. "

[CCAMP] Adam Roach's No Objection on draft-ietf-c… Adam Roach
Re: [CCAMP] Adam Roach's No Objection on draft-ie… Yemin (Amy)