Re: [CCAMP] FW: I-D Action: draft-ietf-ccamp-l1csm-yang-03.txt

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Subject: Re: [CCAMP] FW: I-D Action: draft-ietf-ccamp-l1csm-yang-03.txt
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Young

The most significant comment, for me, is the one about the indentation;
there came a point where I gave up trying to follow the I-D because it
was so hard, so fix that and likely more comments will follow:-)

Tom Petch

----- Original Message -----
From: "Leeyoung" <leeyoung@huawei.com>
To: <ccamp@ietf.org>
Sent: Thursday, June 21, 2018 11:43 PM

> Hi WG,
>
> This revision had some error in the date field in the yang model. So
it is corrected; Tom's comments will be incorporated in the next version
(04).
>
> Thanks,
> Young
>
> -----Original Message-----
> From: CCAMP [mailto:ccamp-bounces@ietf.org] On Behalf Of
internet-drafts@ietf.org
> Sent: Thursday, June 21, 2018 5:35 PM
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> Subject: [CCAMP] I-D Action: draft-ietf-ccamp-l1csm-yang-03.txt
>
>
> A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts
directories.
> This draft is a work item of the Common Control and Measurement Plane
WG of the IETF.
>
>         Title           : A Yang Data Model for L1 Connectivity
Service Model (L1CSM)
>         Authors         : G. Fioccola
>                           K. Lee
>                           Y. Lee
>                           D. Dhody
>                           D. Ceccarelli
> Filename        : draft-ietf-ccamp-l1csm-yang-03.txt
> Pages           : 24
> Date            : 2018-06-21
>
> Abstract:
>    This document provides a YANG data model for Layer 1 Connectivity
>    Service Model (L1CSM).
>
>
>
>
> The IETF datatracker status page for this draft is:
> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-ccamp-l1csm-yang/
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