Re: [CCAMP] I-D Action: draft-ietf-ccamp-rsvp-te-li-lb-04.txt

["Dongjie (Jimmy)" <[e-mail]>]

Hi Lou, 

Thanks a lot for your review and comments, please see my replies inline:

> Jie, Authors,
>     I have a few comments:
> 
> - Section 3.1,
> I think intermediate node behavior related to processing of the A is unchanged
> by this document so think you should drop the 3 lines that contain the phrase "...
> intermediate nodes ..."

Agree the behavior of intermediate node is unchanged, will remove the descriptions about intermediate node behavior in a new revision. 

> - Section 3.2
> The section is not clear if the A bit processing occurs / completes before
> Loopback related processing begins or occurs coincidentally.  (I read the last
> sentence of the first paragraph saying the former and the last sentence of the
> 2nd paragraph saying the latter.)  Either way it should be clarified.

The A bit (lock) processing needs to be completed before initiating loopback request. The last sentence of the 2nd paragraph was to emphasize that when signaling loopback, the A bit should be kept set to indicate the LSP is still in lock mode.
We will rephrase the sentence to make it clearer.

> Where is the Loopback (B) bit / Attribute Flag defined? This document, right?
> Then the document, needs to state so in this section and in the IANA section.

The Loopback bit was defined in the end of section 2 "Extensions to RSVP-TE". To make it clearer, will use subsections for each extension in the new revision.

> Section 4, needs to be updated to follow RFC2360, See
> http://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-ccamp-mpls-tp-rsvpte-ext-associated-lsp-1
> 0
> for a recent example.

Thanks for pointing to this example. Will update the IANA section accordingly.

> - Also please cleanup your id-nits, see
> http://tools.ietf.org/idnits?url=https://tools.ietf.org/id/draft-ietf-ccamp-rsvp-t
> e-li-lb-04.txt

Will clean this in the new revision.

Best regards,
Jie

> 
> Lou
> 
> On 10/20/2014 3:58 AM, Dongjie (Jimmy) wrote:
> > Dear all,
> >
> > The only change in this new version is:
> >
> > - Update the references (one has become RFC)
> >
> > Your review and comments are highly appreciated.
> >
> > Many thanks,
> > Jie
> >
> >> -----Original Message-----
> >> From: CCAMP [mailto:[e-mail]] On Behalf Of
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> >> Subject: [CCAMP] I-D Action: draft-ietf-ccamp-rsvp-te-li-lb-04.txt
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> >>
> >> A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts
> directories.
> >>  This draft is a work item of the Common Control and Measurement
> >> Plane Working Group of the IETF.
> >>
> >>         Title           : GMPLS RSVP-TE Extensions for Lock Instruct
> and
> >> Loopback
> >>         Authors         : Jie Dong
> >>                           Mach(Guoyi) Chen
> >>                           Zhenqiang Li
> >>                           Daniele Ceccarelli
> >> 	Filename        : draft-ietf-ccamp-rsvp-te-li-lb-04.txt
> >> 	Pages           : 8
> >> 	Date            : 2014-10-20
> >>
> >> Abstract:
> >>    This document specifies extensions to Resource Reservation Protocol -
> >>    Traffic Engineering (RSVP-TE) to support Lock Instruct (LI) and
> >>    Loopback (LB) mechanisms for Label Switched Paths (LSPs).  These
> >>    mechanisms are applicable to technologies which use Generalized
> >>    Multi-Protocol Label Switching (GMPLS) as control plane.
> >>
> >>
> >>
> >> The IETF datatracker status page for this draft is:
> >> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-ccamp-rsvp-te-li-lb/
> >>
> >> There's also a htmlized version available at:
> >> http://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-ccamp-rsvp-te-li-lb-04
> >>
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> >>
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