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Re: [CCAMP] Ben Campbell's No Objection on draft-ietf-ccamp-ospf-availability-extension-10: (with COMMENT)

"Yemin (Amy)" <amy.yemin@huawei.com> Fri, 13 October 2017 07:23 UTC

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From: "Yemin (Amy)" <amy.yemin@huawei.com>
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Subject: Re: [CCAMP] Ben Campbell's No Objection on draft-ietf-ccamp-ospf-availability-extension-10: (with COMMENT)
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Hi Ben,

Thanks for your comments. 
We will address all your comments in next version. 

BR,
Amy

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From: Ben Campbell [mailto:ben@nostrum.com] 
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Subject: Ben Campbell's No Objection on draft-ietf-ccamp-ospf-availability-extension-10: (with COMMENT)

Ben Campbell has entered the following ballot position for
draft-ietf-ccamp-ospf-availability-extension-10: No Objection

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 I support Adam's DISCUSS.

It seems odd to find the terminology section before section 1.  Also, please consider using the boilerplate from 8174, especially since there are lower case instances of at least "should".

I think the reference to RFC5920 needs to be normative, since reading that document seems necessary to understand the security considerations.

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