Re: [CDNi] [E] Éric Vyncke's No Objection on draft-ietf-cdni-request-routing-extensions-07: (with COMMENT)

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Hi Eric - Thank you for your review and comments. Will update the documents with nits identified with spell checker and add clarity in sec 2.3.

Thanks
Sanjay

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Thank you for the work put into this document. I have a couple of comments and
nits.

Regards,

-éric

== COMMENTS ==

One generic suggestion (no need to act on a COMMENT): add the definition of
"router" in this document as it is not the typical IP-layer router as in most
IETF documents.

-- Section 2.3 --
It is unclear to me whether the 3xx redirection (cfr last example) can switch
from HTTP to HTTPS or vice-versa? Should the 'httptarget' include the
scheme/protocol to be used ? In any case, the text should be clear whether the
scheme is kept between original request and the scheme in the redirected
location. Or is it specify in the OpenCache spec ?

== NITS ==

-- Abstract --
Please expand FCI at first use.

-- Requirements language --
Unusual place in the document. It will be fixed by the RFC Editor probably
later in the process.

-- Section 2 --
s/defintion/definition/, I will stop looking for typos, easier to use a spell
checker ;)