Re: [CDNi] TR: New Version Notification for draft-fieau-cdni-interfaces-https-delegation-05.txt

Hi Kevin,

I’m OK with most of your remarks.

Regarding examples, why do you think they should be removed?

ACME/STAR and SubCerts should be, IMO, considered as normative reference since reading those drafts first is a necessary step to understand and configure CDNI metadata.

Thx,
Frederic

De : Kevin Ma [mailto:kevin.j.ma.ietf@gmail.com]
Envoyé : dimanche 4 novembre 2018 20:55
À : FIEAU Frédéric TGI/OLN
Cc : <cdni@ietf.org>
Objet : Re: [CDNi] TR: New Version Notification for draft-fieau-cdni-interfaces-https-delegation-05.txt

Hi Frederic,

  (As and individual) I think the updated draft looks good.  A few minor comments:
  - I would consider hyphenating your property names to make them more readable, e.g., credentials-delegating-entity vs. credentialsdelegatingentity.
  - I would add a link to Section 5.1 from the periodicity properties
  - In the json examples, I would remove "AcmeStarDelegationMethod: " and "SubcertsDelegationMethod:"
  Finally, do you think the ACME STAR and TLS SubCerts drafts should be normative references?

thanx.

--  Kevin J. Ma

On Mon, Sep 17, 2018 at 10:07 AM <frederic.fieau@orange.com<mailto:frederic.fieau@orange.com>> wrote:
Dear all,

I just posted a new version of the draft "draft-fieau-cdni-interfaces-https-delegation-05" extending the current RFC 8006 on MetaData Interface to support delegation schemes in CDNI.

Feel free to comment,

Regards,
Frederic

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À : Sanjay Mishra; STEPHAN Emile IMT/OLN; STEPHAN Emile IMT/OLN; FIEAU Frédéric IMT/OLN
Objet : New Version Notification for draft-fieau-cdni-interfaces-https-delegation-05.txt

A new version of I-D, draft-fieau-cdni-interfaces-https-delegation-05.txt
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Name:           draft-fieau-cdni-interfaces-https-delegation
Revision:       05
Title:          CDNI extensions for HTTPS delegation
Document date:  2018-09-17
Group:          Individual Submission
Pages:          10
URL:            https://www.ietf.org/internet-drafts/draft-fieau-cdni-interfaces-https-delegation-05.txt
Status:         https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-fieau-cdni-interfaces-https-delegation/
Htmlized:       https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-fieau-cdni-interfaces-https-delegation-05
Htmlized:       https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-fieau-cdni-interfaces-https-delegation
Diff:           https://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-fieau-cdni-interfaces-https-delegation-05

Abstract:
   The delivery of content over HTTPS involving multiple CDNs raises
   credential management issues.  This document proposes extensions in
   CDNI Control and Metadata interfaces to setup HTTPS delegation from
   an Upstream CDN (uCDN) to a Downstream CDN (dCDN).

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