Re: [CDNi] Tsvart last call review of draft-ietf-cdni-request-routing-extensions-05
Barry Leiba <barryleiba@computer.org> Mon, 09 September 2019 17:57 UTC
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From: Barry Leiba <barryleiba@computer.org>
Date: Mon, 09 Sep 2019 13:56:50 -0400
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To: Michael Tüxen <tuexen@fh-muenster.de>
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Subject: Re: [CDNi] Tsvart last call review of draft-ietf-cdni-request-routing-extensions-05
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Thanks so much for the review, Michael. I like your suggestions and hope the authors will incorporate them into the pending revised I-D, before I send the document to IESG Evaluation. Barry On Mon, Sep 9, 2019 at 1:51 PM Michael Tüxen via Datatracker <noreply@ietf.org> wrote: > > Reviewer: Michael Tüxen > Review result: Ready with Nits > > This document has been reviewed as part of the transport area review team's > ongoing effort to review key IETF documents. These comments were written > primarily for the transport area directors, but are copied to the document's > authors and WG to allow them to address any issues raised and also to the IETF > discussion list for information. > > When done at the time of IETF Last Call, the authors should consider this > review as part of the last-call comments they receive. Please always CC > tsv-art@ietf.org if you reply to or forward this review. > > I have not identified any transport related issues. > > To improve readability, you might want to > * resolve acronyms on first occurence like CDN, CDNI,... > * Remove section 1.1, since the introduced abbreviations are not used in the text. > * add a graphical representation of the involved nodes and the messages being exchanged between them > > Typos: > * Section 3: the uCDN provide a fallback -> the uCDN provides a fallback > * Section 6: Nir B. Sopher -> Nir B. Sopher (no double space after period) > * Section 6: Kevin J. Ma -> Kevin J. Ma (no double space after period) >
- [CDNi] Tsvart last call review of draft-ietf-cdni… Michael Tüxen via Datatracker
- Re: [CDNi] Tsvart last call review of draft-ietf-… Barry Leiba
- Re: [CDNi] Tsvart last call review of draft-ietf-… Ori Finkelman (IETF)
- Re: [CDNi] Tsvart last call review of draft-ietf-… Ori Finkelman (IETF)
- Re: [CDNi] Tsvart last call review of draft-ietf-… Michael Tuexen
- Re: [CDNi] Tsvart last call review of draft-ietf-… Ori Finkelman (IETF)