Re: [CDNi] [E] Roman Danyliw's Discuss on draft-ietf-cdni-request-routing-extensions-07: (with DISCUSS and COMMENT)

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Hi Roman - Thank you for your review and comments. Will updated sec 5 WRT ECS and thank you for catching the typo's. Next revision will include these changes.

Thank you
Sanjay

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Subject: [E] Roman Danyliw's Discuss on draft-ietf-cdni-request-routing-extensions-07: (with DISCUSS and COMMENT)

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DISCUSS:
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Section 2 notes the use of EDNS0.  Please provide guidance in Section 5.1
(Privacy Considerations) given the caution described in Sections 2 and 11.1 of
RFC7871. This is likely the same feedback provided by Alissa Cooper in her
ballot.


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COMMENT:
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** Section 1.  Add an informative reference to the Open Caching WG of SVA

** Editorial Nits
Abstract.  Typo.  s/Interconnetion/Interconnection/

Section 1. Typo. s/commerical/commercial/

Section 1.1.  Typo.  s/Additionaly/Additionally/

Section 2.  Typo.  s/defintion/definition/

Section 2.  Typo.  s/implemenation/implementation/

Section 2. Typo. s/interperet/interpret/

Section 4.  Typo. s/adveritses/advertises/

Section 5.1.  Typo.  s/strcture/structure/

Section 5.1.  Typo.  s/implemenation/implementation/