Re: [CDNi] Tsvart last call review of draft-ietf-cdni-request-routing-extensions-05

"Ori Finkelman (IETF)" <ori.finkelman.ietf@gmail.com> Tue, 10 September 2019 12:36 UTC

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Date: Tue, 10 Sep 2019 15:36:28 +0300
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To: Michael Tuexen <tuexen@fh-muenster.de>
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Works, thanks.
Cheers,
Ori

On Tue, Sep 10, 2019 at 11:16 AM Michael Tuexen <tuexen@fh-muenster.de>
wrote:

> On 10. Sep 2019, at 10:00, Ori Finkelman (IETF) <
> ori.finkelman.ietf@gmail.com> wrote:
> >
> > btw,
> > The double space after period is a result of the xml2RFC tool that adds
> a second space after a period with a space.
> > The only way I found around it is to manually edit the text file after
> it was generated.
> Does
> Nir B.&nbsp;Sopher
> instead of
> Nir B. Sopher
> in the .xml file work?
> This worked at least for me in the past.
>
> Best regards
> Michael
> >
> >
> >
> > On Mon, Sep 9, 2019 at 8:51 PM Michael Tüxen via Datatracker <
> noreply@ietf.org> wrote:
> > Reviewer: Michael Tüxen
> > Review result: Ready with Nits
> >
> > This document has been reviewed as part of the transport area review
> team's
> > ongoing effort to review key IETF documents. These comments were written
> > primarily for the transport area directors, but are copied to the
> document's
> > authors and WG to allow them to address any issues raised and also to
> the IETF
> > discussion list for information.
> >
> > When done at the time of IETF Last Call, the authors should consider this
> > review as part of the last-call comments they receive. Please always CC
> > tsv-art@ietf.org if you reply to or forward this review.
> >
> > I have not identified any transport related issues.
> >
> > To improve readability, you might want to
> > * resolve acronyms on first occurence like CDN, CDNI,...
> > * Remove section 1.1, since the introduced abbreviations are not used in
> the text.
> > * add a graphical representation of the involved nodes and the messages
> being exchanged between them
> >
> > Typos:
> > * Section 3: the uCDN provide a fallback -> the uCDN provides a fallback
> > * Section 6: Nir B.  Sopher -> Nir B. Sopher (no double space after
> period)
> > * Section 6: Kevin J.  Ma -> Kevin J. Ma (no double space after period)
> >
>
>