Re: [CDNi] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-cdni-request-routing-extensions-05
Ori Finkelman <orifinkelman@gmail.com> Wed, 21 August 2019 21:05 UTC
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From: Ori Finkelman <orifinkelman@gmail.com>
Date: Thu, 22 Aug 2019 00:05:30 +0300
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To: Dan Romascanu <dromasca@gmail.com>
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Subject: Re: [CDNi] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-cdni-request-routing-extensions-05
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Thank you Dan for your time and comments. I'll fix them for the next revision. Best regards, Ori On Tue, Aug 20, 2019, 12:09 Dan Romascanu via Datatracker <noreply@ietf.org> wrote: > Reviewer: Dan Romascanu > Review result: Ready with Nits > > I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area > Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed > by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just > like any other last call comments. > > For more information, please see the FAQ at > > <https://trac.ietf.org/trac/gen/wiki/GenArtfaq>. > > Document: draft-ietf-cdni-request-routing-extensions-05 > Reviewer: Dan Romascanu > Review Date: 2019-08-20 > IETF LC End Date: 2019-08-28 > IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat > > Summary: > This document is ready from a Gen-ART perspective, with a couple of nits > which > could be fixed in the RFC Editor processing after approval Major issues: > None > Minor issues: None Nits/editorial comments: > > 1. Several non-obvious acronyms are not expanded: FCI, FQDN > 2. Section 3 - typo in the first paragraph '...the uCDN MUST be differnet > ...' > > >
- [CDNi] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-cdni… Dan Romascanu via Datatracker
- Re: [CDNi] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-… Ori Finkelman (IETF)
- Re: [CDNi] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-… Ori Finkelman
- Re: [CDNi] [Gen-art] Genart last call review of d… Alissa Cooper