[CDNi] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-cdni-request-routing-extensions-05

Dan Romascanu via Datatracker <noreply@ietf.org> Tue, 20 August 2019 09:09 UTC

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Subject: [CDNi] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-cdni-request-routing-extensions-05

Reviewer: Dan Romascanu
Review result: Ready with Nits

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Document: draft-ietf-cdni-request-routing-extensions-05
Reviewer: Dan Romascanu
Review Date: 2019-08-20
IETF LC End Date: 2019-08-28
IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat

Summary:
This document is ready from a Gen-ART perspective, with a couple of nits which
could be fixed in the RFC Editor processing after approval Major issues: None
Minor issues: None Nits/editorial comments:

1. Several non-obvious acronyms are not expanded: FCI, FQDN
2. Section 3 - typo in the first paragraph '...the uCDN MUST be differnet ...'

[CDNi] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-cdni… Dan Romascanu via Datatracker
Re: [CDNi] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-… Ori Finkelman (IETF)
Re: [CDNi] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-… Ori Finkelman
Re: [CDNi] [Gen-art] Genart last call review of d… Alissa Cooper