[Cfrg] Laurent Ciavaglia's No Objection on draft-irtf-cfrg-randomness-improvements-12: (with COMMENT)

Laurent Ciavaglia via Datatracker <noreply@ietf.org> Tue, 26 May 2020 10:31 UTC

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Subject: [Cfrg] Laurent Ciavaglia's No Objection on draft-irtf-cfrg-randomness-improvements-12: (with COMMENT)
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Laurent Ciavaglia has entered the following ballot position for
draft-irtf-cfrg-randomness-improvements-12: No Objection

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Not being an expert in the field, I read the document from a high-level point
of view. The document is sufficiently well-written to be understandable from a
wide audience, and is clear in its goal. Only a minor suggestion: when using
"an adversary Adv", it may be better to put 'Adv' to avoid any confusion with
another meaning or misspelling of a word or acronym.