[CGA-EXT] Typos in draft-ietf-csi-hash-threat-10 + little comment

Tony Cheneau <tony.cheneau@it-sudparis.eu> Tue, 20 July 2010 09:59 UTC

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Subject: [CGA-EXT] Typos in draft-ietf-csi-hash-threat-10 + little comment
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Hello Ana, Suresh and Sheng,

I read your document and noted the following typos:

Section 3:
theaforementioned => the aforementioned

Section 5:
"the attacks against hash functions hash attacks" => "the attacks
against hash functions"

Also, I see that section 4 from the -09 version has been removed ("Support 
for the hash agility in SEND"). I read the IESG evaluation record and I 
fail to see why this part was removed. Could you detail this decision ? 
IMHO, this section was especially important because RFC 4982 only 
describes CGA related issues and not SEND issues.

Regards,
 	Tony