Re: [clue] FW: I-D Action: draft-ietf-clue-rtp-mapping-13.txt

On 2/13/17 4:59 AM, Roni Even wrote:
> Hi,
> This new version is submitted to address Magnus and Ben comments.
> There is a new section Communication security that specifies normative security for CLUE media.
> The security consideration is just considerations and added text about the CaptureID
> There are also some editorial and nits changes
> Roni

Magnus & Ben: does this resolve your issues?

I noticed one nit:

In Section 10 the following text:

    ... A mandatory to implement and use
    media security solution is created by combining this secured RTP
    profile and DTLS-SRTP keying [RFC5764] as defined in the
    communication security section of this memo Section 7

is lacking a period at the end. Based on the diffs it may also be 
lacking a paragraph break, but in the actual document there is a page 
break there so it is hard to say for sure.

No need to fix it now. It can await the next edit.

	Thanks,
	Paul

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> A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts directories.
> This draft is a work item of the ControLling mUltiple streams for tElepresence of the IETF.
>
>         Title           : Mapping RTP streams to CLUE Media Captures
>         Authors         : Roni Even
>                           Jonathan Lennox
> 	Filename        : draft-ietf-clue-rtp-mapping-13.txt
> 	Pages           : 14
> 	Date            : 2017-02-13
>
> Abstract:
>    This document describes how the Real Time transport Protocol (RTP) is
>    used in the context of the CLUE protocol (ControLling mUltiple
>    streams for tElepresence).  It also describes the mechanisms and
>    recommended practice for mapping RTP media streams defined in Session
>    Description Protocol (SDP) to CLUE Media Captures and defines a new
>    RTP header extension (CaptureId).
>
>
> The IETF datatracker status page for this draft is:
> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-clue-rtp-mapping/
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