Re: [clue] Éric Vyncke's No Objection on draft-ietf-clue-datachannel-15: (with COMMENT)

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From: "Eric Vyncke (evyncke)" <evyncke@cisco.com>
To: Christer Holmberg <christer.holmberg@ericsson.com>, The IESG <iesg@ietf.org>
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Christer

Thank you for your reply, I am clear now

-éric

On 05/04/2019, 21:25, "Christer Holmberg" <christer.holmberg@ericsson.com> wrote:

    
    
    Hi Éric,
    
    Thank You for your review! Please see inline.
        
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        COMMENT:
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    >    While the I-D was waiting for missing references, RFC 2119 has been obsoleted
    >    by RFC 8174 => please update section 2.
      
    I will update the reference as suggested.
    
    ---
    
    >    It is unclear for me in section 3.2.7 whether the 'stream reset' actually
    >    refers to RFC 6525 "SSN reset". Looking forward to being enlighten on this
    >    point.
      
    It does. But, I think "stream reset" is the terminology used in 6525.
    
    -----
      
        *Nits*
        
    >    Section 3.2.2, I wonder whether the note is really required as it restates
    >    parts of another documents (even if it gives some more context as in other
    >    subsections of section 3.2).
      
    People requested the clarification, so I'd like to keep it.
    
    >    Section 3.2.7 s/Close CLUE data channel/Closing the CLUE data channel/
    
    You want to change the Section title?
    
    I have no strong opinion, so I am ok to change as suggested.
        
    Regards,
    
    Christer