Re: [clue] Éric Vyncke's No Objection on draft-ietf-clue-datachannel-15: (with COMMENT)

Christer Holmberg <christer.holmberg@ericsson.com> Fri, 05 April 2019 19:25 UTC

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Hi Éric,

Thank You for your review! Please see inline.
    
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    COMMENT:
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>    While the I-D was waiting for missing references, RFC 2119 has been obsoleted
>    by RFC 8174 => please update section 2.
  
I will update the reference as suggested.

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>    It is unclear for me in section 3.2.7 whether the 'stream reset' actually
>    refers to RFC 6525 "SSN reset". Looking forward to being enlighten on this
>    point.
  
It does. But, I think "stream reset" is the terminology used in 6525.

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    *Nits*
    
>    Section 3.2.2, I wonder whether the note is really required as it restates
>    parts of another documents (even if it gives some more context as in other
>    subsections of section 3.2).
  
People requested the clarification, so I'd like to keep it.

>    Section 3.2.7 s/Close CLUE data channel/Closing the CLUE data channel/

You want to change the Section title?

I have no strong opinion, so I am ok to change as suggested.
    
Regards,

Christer