[clue] Mirja Kühlewind's No Objection on draft-ietf-clue-rtp-mapping-12: (with COMMENT)
"Mirja Kuehlewind" <ietf@kuehlewind.net> Tue, 17 January 2017 14:22 UTC
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Subject: [clue] Mirja Kühlewind's No Objection on draft-ietf-clue-rtp-mapping-12: (with COMMENT)
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Mirja Kühlewind has entered the following ballot position for draft-ietf-clue-rtp-mapping-12: No Objection When responding, please keep the subject line intact and reply to all email addresses included in the To and CC lines. (Feel free to cut this introductory paragraph, however.) Please refer to https://www.ietf.org/iesg/statement/discuss-criteria.html for more information about IESG DISCUSS and COMMENT positions. The document, along with other ballot positions, can be found here: https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-clue-rtp-mapping/ ---------------------------------------------------------------------- COMMENT: ---------------------------------------------------------------------- - I find the following sentence in the abstract rather confusing: „This document describes how the Real Time transport Protocol (RTP) is used in the context of the CLUE protocol.“ I would just start with the second sentence directly and potentially also mention that this doc defines a new RTP Header Extension for the mapping. - There is still some redundancy in this document that could be removed for more clarity.
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