[clue] Alexey Melnikov's No Objection on draft-ietf-clue-protocol-17: (with COMMENT)

Alexey Melnikov <aamelnikov@fastmail.fm> Tue, 20 November 2018 16:49 UTC

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Subject: [clue] Alexey Melnikov's No Objection on draft-ietf-clue-protocol-17: (with COMMENT)

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draft-ietf-clue-protocol-17: No Objection

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I support Ben's DISCUSS.

A couple of extra nits, which I think need addressing:

XML and XML Schema need to be a Normative References.

12.4.1.  CLUE Message Types

   +-------------------+-----------------------------------+-----------+
   | Message           | Description                       | Reference |
   +-------------------+-----------------------------------+-----------+
   | options           | Sent by the CI to the CR  in the  | RFCXXXX   |
   |                   | initiation phase to specify the   |           |
   |                   | roles played by the CI, the       |           |
   |                   | supported versions and the        |           |
   |                   | supported extensions.             |           |
   | optionsResponse   | Sent by the CI to the CR in reply | RFCXXXX   |

Should the above be: "Sent by the CR to the CI ..."

   |                   | to an 'options' message to        |           |
   |                   | finally estabilsh the version and |           |

Typo: establish

   |                   | the extensions to be used in the  |           |
   |                   | following CLUE messages exchange. |           |

Examples in Section 10 contain URI
"http://wpage.unina.it/spromano/clue-protocol-17-schema-file.xsd". Maybe they
shouldn't.

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