[clue] Roman Danyliw's No Objection on draft-ietf-clue-datachannel-15: (with COMMENT)
Roman Danyliw via Datatracker <noreply@ietf.org> Thu, 11 April 2019 00:41 UTC
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Subject: [clue] Roman Danyliw's No Objection on draft-ietf-clue-datachannel-15: (with COMMENT)
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Roman Danyliw has entered the following ballot position for draft-ietf-clue-datachannel-15: No Objection When responding, please keep the subject line intact and reply to all email addresses included in the To and CC lines. (Feel free to cut this introductory paragraph, however.) Please refer to https://www.ietf.org/iesg/statement/discuss-criteria.html for more information about IESG DISCUSS and COMMENT positions. The document, along with other ballot positions, can be found here: https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-clue-datachannel/ ---------------------------------------------------------------------- COMMENT: ---------------------------------------------------------------------- A few nits: (1) Section 1. Typo (missing space). s/[I-D.ietf-clue-protocol]messages/ [I-D.ietf-clue-protocol] messages/ (2) Section 1. Editorial Nit. s/data channel Establishment Protocol/ Data Channel Establishment Protocol/ (3) Section 3.2.1, Typo s/(e.g. regarding ordered delivery )/ (e.g., regarding ordered delivery)/ (4) Section 3.2.1. Typo. s/signalled/signaled/ (5) Section 3.2.3, Per “[I-D.ietf-rtcweb-data-channel] also mandates support of the limited retransmission policy defined in [RFC7496].”, I was expecting to read something about how this extension is also not needed by CLUE like the previous part of the paragraph. Right now the text only states something about rtcweb but not CLUE.
- [clue] Roman Danyliw's No Objection on draft-ietf… Roman Danyliw via Datatracker
- Re: [clue] Roman Danyliw's No Objection on draft-… Christer Holmberg
- Re: [clue] Roman Danyliw's No Objection on draft-… Roman Danyliw