Re: [conex] TCP mods: Intro

Mirja Kühlewind <mirja.kuehlewind@tik.ee.ethz.ch> Tue, 28 October 2014 10:13 UTC

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Hi Nandita,

I've added one more sentence:

"Section 5 finally discusses timeliness of the ConEx feedback signal as 
congestion is a temporary state."

Section 6 is acknowledgements...

Mirja


On 27.10.2014 19:23, Nandita Dukkipati wrote:
>>
>>
>> Would it be helpful if I add a paragraph saying:
>>
>> „Section 2 provides an overview of the needed modifications for TCP
>> senders to implement ConEx.
>> First congestion information have to be extracted from loss or ECN
>> feedback in TCP
>> as described in Section 3. Section 4 details how to set the CDO marking
>> based on the accounted
>> congestion information.“
>>
>
> The above para is much clearer than before. Thanks. Please also include a
> sentence or two on the remaining Sections 5 and 6.
>
> Nandita
>

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