Re: [conex] Comments on draft-ietf-conex-mobile-03
Nandita Dukkipati <nanditad@google.com> Tue, 22 July 2014 20:05 UTC
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Subject: Re: [conex] Comments on draft-ietf-conex-mobile-03
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Continuing with some more comments... Section 2 is ConEx use cases in Mobile Communication Networks, while Section 3 is ConEx in EPS. Isn't ConEx in EPS also a part of the mobile communication networks? I am not getting it: what did you intend to be the key difference between Sections 2 and 3. As such my comment for Section 3 is same as below for Section 2: explain the problem, and then lay out the ConEx based solution/architecture. Nandita On Tue, Jul 22, 2014 at 10:28 AM, Nandita Dukkipati <nanditad@google.com> wrote: > (as individual contributor). > > Still reading, but wanted to pass on comments on early part of the draft. > > Introduction > > * The second para describing measurements in cellular networks: is > there a reference to the data? > > Section 2.1 ConEx as a basis for Traffic Management > > * The second para goes into great details on QoS requirements in EPS, > radio bearers etc... but you lost me: what is the point you want to > make? > > * On reading further into Section 2.1, I am just not getting the high > order point you want to make here. The text switches back and forth > between explaining the current state in mobile networks (DPI etc.), > and that ConEx can be useful. > > Instead, I suggest the following: separate out the two. First clearly > explain the traffic management problem in cellular networks. Then go > on with the specifics on how ConEx can be used to address the problems > laid out. > > I think the above split will save the readers a lot of time in trying > to parse through Sec. 2.1 > > Further, the usefulness of ConEx is referred to in very high level > terms with little details. Going a step further and specifying some > level of detail as to how ConEx might exactly work in mobile will be > useful. > > Nandita
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