Re: [conex] Ben Campbell's Discuss on draft-ietf-conex-mobile-05: (with DISCUSS and COMMENT)

Martin Stiemerling <mls.ietf@gmail.com> Thu, 01 October 2015 09:15 UTC

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Subject: Re: [conex] Ben Campbell's Discuss on draft-ietf-conex-mobile-05: (with DISCUSS and COMMENT)
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Hi Ben,

Am 30.09.15 um 23:16 schrieb Ben Campbell:

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> The security considerations section seems substantially incomplete. The
> phrase "include, but are not limited to" seems to indicate that people
> thought there were additional considerations. Please write them down, or
> explain why there really aren't additional considerations.

A bit more text can help here, though a number of threats might be 
obvious by now or might depend on the "version" of the mobile network.

However, I let the authors to get more text and suggestions to you.

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> There is an IPR declaration that lists this as an "associated draft". I'm
> not sure what to make of that, but it was not mentioned in the shepherd
> review.

The IPR you are mention (https://datatracker.ietf.org/ipr/1922/) is sort 
of a spread shot across all conex documents. The shepherd write-up 
should have mentioned it, indeed.

However, the WG did and does know about this IPR. Use this as anchor in 
the mail archive if you are looking for it:
https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/conex/cDSGuMhPDwMPOZH8YJGdVEi0yuk

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> This reads much like an advocacy white paper. There's useful information
> in it, but I would have preferred less of the marketing tone. But that's
> just me, and I don't expect that to change this late in the process.

ok, thanks.

   Martin