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Date: Mon, 19 Dec 2011 08:29:27 +0000
Thread-Topic: [conex] WGLC for draft-ietf-conex-concepts-uses-03.txt
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Subject: Re: [conex] WGLC for draft-ietf-conex-concepts-uses-03.txt
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Here are some late comments on the draft, sorry they are late/
Best wishes
Phil

Doc is good, seems ready to me. Minor comments

S2.2 "congestion is a property of a link or a path" - seems in tension with=
 the statement at the end of S2.1 "[this doc doesn't define] congestion as =
a condition or state"?

S2.3 para 1, "measures" -> "is" (twice) - think this would be better as you=
're defining what rest-of-path & upstream congestion are

Last para of S3, p10. There's a bit of a jump from the penultimate sentence=
 about flat rate pricing to the last sentence about conex. Needs some linki=
ng

S4, Enabling more efficient capacity provisioning - this para is hard to fo=
llow, it twists around a bit. Also, change title to Enabling more efficient=
 usage of capacity? I think it may be simpler to split into a use case whic=
h is user-focussed (about scavenger) and another which is operator-focussed=
.

S5 para 2 "strong incentive to tell the network .. data" -> "some incentive=
 to deploy conex"

Para 3, Specifies -> proposes (so you don't have to wait for the conex-tcp =
draft)



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From: conex-bounces@ietf.org [mailto:conex-bounces@ietf.org] On Behalf Of m=
arcelo bagnulo braun
Sent: 17 November 2011 01:53
To: 'ConEx IETF list'
Subject: [conex] WGLC for draft-ietf-conex-concepts-uses-03.txt

This note issues the WGLC for draft-ietf-conex-concepts-uses-03.txt.
(http://www.ietf.org/id/draft-ietf-conex-concepts-uses-03.txt)

Please review the document and send comments before the 5th december.

Thanks, marcelo
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