Re: [conex] TCP mods: Intro

Nandita Dukkipati <nanditad@google.com> Mon, 27 October 2014 18:27 UTC

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>
>
> Would it be helpful if I add a paragraph saying:
>
> „Section 2 provides an overview of the needed modifications for TCP
> senders to implement ConEx.
> First congestion information have to be extracted from loss or ECN
> feedback in TCP
> as described in Section 3. Section 4 details how to set the CDO marking
> based on the accounted
> congestion information.“
>

The above para is much clearer than before. Thanks. Please also include a
sentence or two on the remaining Sections 5 and 6.

Nandita