Re: [conex] WGLC for draft-ietf-conex-concepts-uses-03.txt

Hi Phil,

Thanks. I have entered these into the tracker. Just one question below --

On Dec 19, 2011, at 2:29 AM, <philip.eardley@bt.com> <philip.eardley@bt.com> wrote:
> S2.3 para 1, "measures" -> "is" (twice) - think this would be better as you're defining what rest-of-path & upstream congestion are
> 

I don't understand what you mean by "this."

Best,
Alissa

> Last para of S3, p10. There's a bit of a jump from the penultimate sentence about flat rate pricing to the last sentence about conex. Needs some linking
> 
> S4, Enabling more efficient capacity provisioning - this para is hard to follow, it twists around a bit. Also, change title to Enabling more efficient usage of capacity? I think it may be simpler to split into a use case which is user-focussed (about scavenger) and another which is operator-focussed.
> 
> S5 para 2 "strong incentive to tell the network .. data" -> "some incentive to deploy conex"
> 
> Para 3, Specifies -> proposes (so you don't have to wait for the conex-tcp draft)
> 
> 
> 
> Philip Eardley   
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> From: conex-bounces@ietf.org [mailto:conex-bounces@ietf.org] On Behalf Of marcelo bagnulo braun
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> Subject: [conex] WGLC for draft-ietf-conex-concepts-uses-03.txt
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> This note issues the WGLC for draft-ietf-conex-concepts-uses-03.txt.
> (http://www.ietf.org/id/draft-ietf-conex-concepts-uses-03.txt)
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> Please review the document and send comments before the 5th december.
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> Thanks, marcelo
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