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From: Thomas Fossati <Thomas.Fossati@arm.com>
To: Carsten Bormann <cabo@tzi.org>
CC: Marco Tiloca <marco.tiloca=40ri.se@dmarc.ietf.org>, "core@ietf.org" <core@ietf.org>
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Carsten, thanks for addressing my comments.  The PR looks good to me.

cheers!

On 20/02/2023, 13:04, "Carsten Bormann" cabo@tzi.org<mailto:cabo@tzi.org> wrote:
> > On 2023-02-14, at 14:00, Thomas Fossati thomas.fossati@arm.com<mailto:thomas.fossati@arm.com> wrote:
> >
> > Hi Marco, all,
> >
> > The document is in great shape (*), all seems very reasonable and
> > well thought out.
> > I support moving it forward – and adjusting the registrations
> > depending on the relative speed of the OSCORE drafts.
> >
> > Cheers, thanks!
> >
> > (*) Apart from a couple of editorial nits in the Introduction:
> > - The redundant “(Please see abstract.)”
>
> I copied over the abstract to the introduction (as far as not already
> done), and made the abstract reference-free (as required by Paragraph
> 3 of Section 4.3 of RFC 7322 [1]).
>
> > - A not very well anchored parenthetical “(See also Section 2,
> > Paragraph 2.)” that’s not clear about what the reader is expected to
> > find in the referenced text.
>
> Yes.  I integrated this reference into the penultimate paragraph of
> the introduction.
>
> Now part of
> https://github.com/core-wg/core-target-attr/pull/9
> specifically:
> https://github.com/core-wg/core-target-attr/pull/9/commits/ad60ea5
>
> Grüße, Carsten
>
> [1]: https://www.rfc-editor.org/rfc/rfc7322.html#section-4.3
> Special Chrome link:
> https://www.rfc-editor.org/rfc/rfc7322.html#:~:text=Similarly%2C,%20citations.



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