[core] Murray Kucherawy's No Objection on draft-ietf-core-senml-versions-03: (with COMMENT)
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Subject: [core] Murray Kucherawy's No Objection on draft-ietf-core-senml-versions-03: (with COMMENT)
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Murray Kucherawy has entered the following ballot position for draft-ietf-core-senml-versions-03: No Objection When responding, please keep the subject line intact and reply to all email addresses included in the To and CC lines. (Feel free to cut this introductory paragraph, however.) Please refer to https://www.ietf.org/iesg/statement/discuss-criteria.html for more information about DISCUSS and COMMENT positions. The document, along with other ballot positions, can be found here: https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-core-senml-versions/ ---------------------------------------------------------------------- COMMENT: ---------------------------------------------------------------------- I only have a few nits to contribute here. In Section 2: The present specification defines "SenML Features", each identified by a "feature name" (a text string) and a "feature code", an unsigned integer less than 53. Why is the former descriptive clause parenthetical, while the latter is separated by a comma? In Section 2.1, I think all the instances of "less" should actually be "fewer".
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