Re: [core] Benjamin Kaduk's No Objection on draft-ietf-core-senml-data-ct-06: (with COMMENT)

Carsten Bormann <cabo@tzi.org> Wed, 13 October 2021 20:16 UTC

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Subject: Re: [core] Benjamin Kaduk's No Objection on draft-ietf-core-senml-data-ct-06: (with COMMENT)
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Thank you for all the great input!

On 2021-10-13, at 21:15, Benjamin Kaduk wrote:
> 
> The ABNF comment for the "Cleaned up" entries currently says
> "leaving the parameter as mandatory", which is only true in a
> very specific sense; "leaving the parameter as mandatory within
> the grouping" or "leaving the parameter as mandatory when the
> separator is present" might be more clear to a reader not focusing
> on the specific context of the statement.

Good point.
The best I came up with is:

 ; Cleaned up from [RFC-httpbis-semantics],
 ; leaving only SP as blank space,
 ; removing legacy 8-bit characters, and
-; leaving the parameter as mandatory:
+; leaving the parameter as mandatory with each semicolon:
 
Now the seed content of
https://github.com/core-wg/senml-data-ct/pull/11

Grüße, Carsten