Re: [core] Chair's review of draft-ietf-core-senml-etch-02.txt

Ari Keränen <ari.keranen@ericsson.com> Tue, 05 March 2019 23:40 UTC

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Thank you for the review Carsten! I pretty much agreed with all the 
comments and made a PR to address them:
https://github.com/core-wg/senml-etch/pull/2

If there are no further comments on these, I could merge the PR and 
submit a new version.


Cheers,
Ari

On 20/02/2019 17.00, Carsten Bormann wrote:
> In preparation for the impending working-group last call, I have
> reviewed draft-ietf-core-senml-etch-02.txt.  Substantive comments are
> below; a set of small editorial comments is going to the authors in
> parallel.
> 
> # Minor
> 
> 1. The text of the draft does not contain an argument that the
>     application of Patch Packs is idempotent.  It probably should.
> 
> 2. The text sometimes says "iPATCH" where it probably should be saying
>     "PATCH and iPATCH".  This should be checked throughout.
> 
> 3. The term "resource" is sometimes used in lieu of "subset of SenML
>     records that, when resolved, match a given name".
> 
> Grüße, Carsten
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