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Re: [core] [CoRE] Working Group Last Call (WGLC) of draft-ietf-core-target-attr-01

Carsten Bormann <cabo@tzi.org> Mon, 20 February 2023 13:04 UTC

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> On 2023-02-14, at 14:00, Thomas Fossati <thomas.fossati@arm.com> wrote:
> 
> Hi Marco, all,
>  
> The document is in great shape (*), all seems very reasonable and well thought out.
> I support moving it forward – and adjusting the registrations depending on the relative speed of the OSCORE drafts.
>  
> Cheers, thanks!
>  
> (*) Apart from a couple of editorial nits in the Introduction:
> - The redundant “(Please see abstract.)”

I copied over the abstract to the introduction (as far as not already done), and made the abstract reference-free (as required by Paragraph 3 of Section 4.3 of RFC 7322 [1]).

> - A not very well anchored parenthetical “(See also Section 2, Paragraph 2.)” that’s not clear about what the reader is expected to find in the referenced text.

Yes.  I integrated this reference into the penultimate paragraph of the introduction.

Now part of
https://github.com/core-wg/core-target-attr/pull/9
specifically:
https://github.com/core-wg/core-target-attr/pull/9/commits/ad60ea5

Grüße, Carsten

[1]: https://www.rfc-editor.org/rfc/rfc7322.html#section-4.3
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https://www.rfc-editor.org/rfc/rfc7322.html#:~:text=Similarly%2C,%20citations.

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