Re: [core] Benjamin Kaduk's No Objection on draft-ietf-core-resource-directory-26: (with COMMENT)

"Christian M. Amsüss" <christian@amsuess.com> Sun, 07 March 2021 17:52 UTC

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Date: Sun, 07 Mar 2021 18:52:09 +0100
From: "Christian M. Amsüss" <christian@amsuess.com>
To: Barry Leiba <barryleiba@computer.org>
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Subject: Re: [core] Benjamin Kaduk's No Objection on draft-ietf-core-resource-directory-26: (with COMMENT)
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Hello Barry, hello authors,

On Fri, Feb 26, 2021 at 10:45:19AM -0500, Barry Leiba wrote:
> Let's just wait until you post a revision, so it's easier on the RFC
> Editor.  It won't make very much difference in publication time.
> 
> Please post as soon as the tool opens again, and I'll make sure I
> process it before I officially leave the AD role.

The -28 version contains fixes for the remaining points of Ben's review
as well as an additional capitalization fix. The latest thread does
contain some remarks he made that did not result in a text alteration,
but I think were adaequately responded to.

For as far as I am concerned, this is good to proceed.

Best regards
Christian

---

   changes from -27 to -28

   *  Security policies / link confidentiality: Point out the RD's
      obligations that follow from such a policy.

   *  Simple registration: clarify term "regular registration" by
      introducing it along with the reference to Section 5

   *  Wording fix in first-come-first-remembered

   *  Wording fixes in RD definition

   *  Capitalization: Consistently using "registration resource"

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