[core] Éric Vyncke's No Objection on draft-ietf-core-hop-limit-06: (with COMMENT)

Éric Vyncke via Datatracker <noreply@ietf.org> Fri, 11 October 2019 06:41 UTC

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Subject: [core] Éric Vyncke's No Objection on draft-ietf-core-hop-limit-06: (with COMMENT)
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Éric Vyncke has entered the following ballot position for
draft-ietf-core-hop-limit-06: No Objection

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Thank you for the work put into this document. I have a couple of COMMENTs
(that I would appreciate to see a reply of yours) and one NIT.

Regards,

-éric

== DISCUSS ==

== COMMENTS ==

-- Section 3 --
C.1) "Because forwarding errors may occur if inadequate Hop-Limit values
   are used, proxies at the boundaries of an administrative domain MAY
   be instructed to remove or rewrite the value of Hop-Limit carried in
   received messages" Isn't this remove all usefulness of the Hop-Limit option ?

C.2) table 1, suggest to state the value of the C, U, N, R properties

-- Section 4 --
C.3) while I understand why a proxy should not add its own diagnostic
information when packet should become larger than the MTU of the next link, I
wonder what will happen downstream when the MTU will be exceeded...

C.4) suggest to use normative language (uppercase MAY, MUST, ...)

== NITS ==

-- Section 3 --
N.1) s/if a less value/if a smaller value/ ?