[core] Murray Kucherawy's Yes on draft-ietf-core-stateless-06: (with COMMENT)
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Subject: [core] Murray Kucherawy's Yes on draft-ietf-core-stateless-06: (with COMMENT)
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Murray Kucherawy has entered the following ballot position for draft-ietf-core-stateless-06: Yes When responding, please keep the subject line intact and reply to all email addresses included in the To and CC lines. (Feel free to cut this introductory paragraph, however.) Please refer to https://www.ietf.org/iesg/statement/discuss-criteria.html for more information about IESG DISCUSS and COMMENT positions. The document, along with other ballot positions, can be found here: https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-core-stateless/ ---------------------------------------------------------------------- COMMENT: ---------------------------------------------------------------------- This was very easy to read and understand. Nice work. Editorial stuff: Section 2.2.2: * "... if the server will never be able to handle (e.g., because the token is too large)," -- add "the request" after "handle" * "... a server implementing this document should at least ..." -- s/document/extension/, right? Section 3.1: * "A client SHOULD integrity protect the state ..." -- s/integrity protect/protect the integrity of/ * "Even when the serialized state is integrity protected ..." should be "Even when the integrity of the serialized state is protected ..." * "... the key used for integration protection ..." -- s/integration/integrity/, right? Section 3.3: * "... as a piggybacked response, a separate response or Non-confirmable response, regardless ..." -- comma before "or"
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