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From: Thomas Fossati <Thomas.Fossati@arm.com>
To: Christer Holmberg <christer.holmberg@ericsson.com>, "core@ietf.org" <core@ietf.org>
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Subject: Re: [core] MULTIPART-CT: A few editorial comments
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Hey Christer,

On 23/08/2019, 12:18, "Christer Holmberg" <christer.holmberg@ericsson.com> wrote:
> > I'm not sure multipart-ct should necessarily talk about that, no more
> > than any other MIME types should.  The mapping of resource
> > representations into CoAP frames should be explained by RFC 7252.
>
> Exactly! That is my point :)

Excellent :-)

> RFC 7252 should define/reference the generic CoAP terminology, and we
> should then use that terminology in the CoAP extension document.
>
> Only MULTIPART-CT specific terminology should be defined in MULTIPART-CT.

Could you propose a PR against master [1]?

Cheers, thanks!

[1] https://github.com/core-wg/multipart-ct/blob/master/draft-ietf-core-multipart-ct.md

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