Re: [core] I-D Action: draft-toutain-lpwan-sid-allocation-00.txt

Carsten Bormann <cabo@tzi.org> Mon, 20 February 2023 13:26 UTC

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Hi,

I quickly looked at this to find out whether there is any interaction with core-sid.

Something went wrong with the title :-)

Could you please use CBOR diagnostic notation in the first half of Figure 1?
We don’t need another, slightly different way to notate this…
The other half of Figure 1 is not valid JSON.

I like the way you have written down the allocations; this is very similar to a CSV format I have been using and that I now probably should write up.

Grüße, Carsten


> On 2023-02-20, at 14:19, internet-drafts@ietf.org wrote:
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> A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts directories.
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>        Title           : SCHC Rule Access Control
>        Authors         : Ana Minaburo
>                          Laurent Toutain
>  Filename        : draft-toutain-lpwan-sid-allocation-00.txt
>  Pages           : 10
>  Date            : 2023-02-20
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> Abstract:
>   blabla
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> The IETF datatracker status page for this Internet-Draft is:
> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-toutain-lpwan-sid-allocation/
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> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-toutain-lpwan-sid-allocation-00
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