[core] Benjamin Kaduk's No Objection on draft-ietf-core-senml-data-ct-06: (with COMMENT)

Benjamin Kaduk via Datatracker <noreply@ietf.org> Wed, 13 October 2021 19:15 UTC

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Subject: [core] Benjamin Kaduk's No Objection on draft-ietf-core-senml-data-ct-06: (with COMMENT)
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Benjamin Kaduk has entered the following ballot position for
draft-ietf-core-senml-data-ct-06: No Objection

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Thanks for the updates in the -06 and the discussion to get there.
I'm happy with where things ended up, and have just one comment
after reading the diff:

The ABNF comment for the "Cleaned up" entries currently says
"leaving the parameter as mandatory", which is only true in a
very specific sense; "leaving the parameter as mandatory within
the grouping" or "leaving the parameter as mandatory when the
separator is present" might be more clear to a reader not focusing
on the specific context of the statement.