Re: [core] [netmod] 🔔 admin WG Last Call of CORECONF drafts: draft-ietf-core-yang-yang-library-01
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Subject: Re: [core] [netmod] 🔔 admin WG Last Call of CORECONF drafts: draft-ietf-core-yang-yang-library-01
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Hello Tom, Thank you for your review and your comments! They were indeed very helpful. I will try to spend some more time making sure we follow the recommendations from RFC8407, but for now please find my answers below (prefixed with [IP]). Note that the diff after handing your comments can be found at [1] for the txt file diff and [2] for the raw Markdown diff. Best regards, Ivaylo [1]: https://tools.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url1=draft-ietf-core-yang-library&url2=http://core-wg.github.io/yang-cbor/draft-ietf-core-yang-library-latest.txt [2]: https://github.com/core-wg/yang-cbor/commit/2aa29f2468c827fd4b58cad6a5decba795d9c767 On Mon, Mar 30, 2020 at 12:11 PM tom petch <ietfc@btconnect.com> wrote: > There is quite a lot wrong with the admin of the YANG-library I-D when > compared with RFC8407 IMHO > > Security considerations does not conform to boiler plate > [IP]: Adding the following text in the beginning of the security considerations will make it follow the same structure as RFC7895. Would that be acceptable for you? The YANG module defined in this memo is designed to be accessed via CORECONF {{-comi}}, NETCONF {{RFC6241}} or RESTCONF {{RFC8040}}. Depending on the used protocol, the security considerations of some or all of those will apply. > IANA considerations does not register name space > [IP]: I added such registration. Please let me know if it looks fine. The relevant text is: ## YANG Namespace Registration This document registers the following XML namespace URN in the "IETF XML Registry", following the format defined in {{RFC3688}}: URI: please assign urn:ietf:params:xml:ns:yang:ietf-constrained-yang-library Registrant Contact: The IESG. XML: N/A, the requested URI is an XML namespace. > RFC 6991 is imported and so MUST be a Normative reference > [IP]: Fixed > ietf-sid-file is imported and so MUST be a Normative not Informative > reference for the I-D > [IP]: Fixed reference ietf-core-sid would be better as RFC YYYY with an RFC Editor note > asking them to replace YYYY with the number assigned to 'YANG Schema ... > [IP]: Fixed > Organization Netconf WG seems an odd choice and contradicts contact details > [IP]: Changed to CoRE WG > Contact does not normally specify WG Chairs > > [IP]: I removed the chairs and left only the group and the editors. Is that what you had in mind? more than one revision clause > [IP]: Fixed > CORECONF not an abbreviation I recognise > [IP]: We have received other comments related to this. We will discuss them during the meeting today and try to clarify this. > I will look some more as and when these are addressed (or I see IETF Last > Call:-) > > Tom Petch > ________________________________________ > From: netmod <netmod-bounces@ietf.org> on behalf of Carsten Bormann < > cabo@tzi.org> > Sent: 09 March 2020 13:04 > To: core > Cc: netmod@ietf.org > Subject: [netmod] 🔔 WG Last Call of CORECONF drafts: > draft-ietf-core-yang-cbor-12, -sid-11, -comi-09, -yang-library-01 > > It took us a long time to get the four CORECONF drafts in sync, > but now we are ready for WGLC. > > This starts a working group last call for > — draft-ietf-core-yang-cbor-12 > — draft-ietf-core-sid-11 > — draft-ietf-core-comi-09 > — draft-ietf-core-yang-library-01 > > ending on > > 24:00 UTC on Tuesday, March 31, 2020. > > (This includes some extra time for the IETF week and for cross-WG > coordination.) > > This WGLC is copied to the netmod WG mailing list; please do have a look > at these drafts as they are slated to become a part of the greater > YANG/NETCONF/RESTCONF family. We intend the discussion to be on the > CoRE mailing list, but if you find a fundamental issue with YANG or > RESTCONF, feel free to discuss that on netmod instead. > > Please start a new email thread for each major issue that will need > discussion and make sure the subject line includes the draft name and > some sort of name for the issue. (Minor issues such as typos can also > be sent to the authors.) > > If you read the draft and think it looks fine, please send a one line > email to the list or to the chairs letting us know that so we can get > a feel of how broad the review has been. > > (To reviewers and authors:) If you are aware of any patent claims that > might apply to systems that implement these drafts, please review BCP 78 > and BCP 79 and make any appropriate IPR declaration before the last-call > ends. If you are not sure whether you need to make a declaration or not, > please talk to the chairs and we will help. > > Grüße, Carsten > > _______________________________________________ > netmod mailing list > netmod@ietf.org > https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/netmod > _______________________________________________ > core mailing list > core@ietf.org > https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/core >
- [core] Chair's review of draft-ietf-core-senml-et… Carsten Bormann
- Re: [core] Chair's review of draft-ietf-core-senm… Ari Keränen
- [core] 🔔 WG Last Call of draft-ietf-core-senml-et… Carsten Bormann
- Re: [core] 🔔 WG Last Call of draft-ietf-core-senm… Carsten Bormann
- Re: [core] 🔔 WG Last Call of draft-ietf-core-senm… Christian Amsüss
- Re: [core] 🔔 WG Last Call of draft-ietf-core-senm… Klaus Hartke
- [core] Separate formats for fetch and patch (was:… Christian Amsüss
- Re: [core] 🔔 WG Last Call of draft-ietf-core-senm… Ari Keränen
- Re: [core] 🔔 WG Last Call of draft-ietf-core-senm… Ari Keränen
- Re: [core] 🔔 WG Last Call of draft-ietf-core-senm… Carsten Bormann
- Re: [core] Separate formats for fetch and patch (… Christian M. Amsüss
- Re: [core] Separate formats for fetch and patch (… Carsten Bormann
- Re: [core] 🔔 WG Last Call of draft-ietf-core-senm… Klaus Hartke
- [core] 🔔 WG Last Call of CORECONF drafts: draft-i… Carsten Bormann
- Re: [core] 🔔 WG Last Call of CORECONF drafts: dra… Ivaylo Petrov
- [core] clashin prefix Re: [netmod] 🔔 WG Last Call… tom petch
- Re: [core] [netmod] 🔔 admin WG Last Call of COREC… tom petch
- Re: [core] [netmod] 🔔 admin WG Last Call of COREC… tom petch
- Re: [core] 🔔 WG Last Call of CORECONF drafts: dra… Peter van der Stok
- Re: [core] 🔔 WG Last Call of CORECONF drafts: dra… Andy Bierman
- Re: [core] 🔔 WG Last Call of CORECONF drafts: dra… Ivaylo Petrov
- Re: [core] [netmod] 🔔 admin WG Last Call of COREC… Ivaylo Petrov
- Re: [core] [netmod] 🔔 admin WG Last Call of COREC… tom petch
- Re: [core] [netmod] 🔔 admin WG Last Call of COREC… Ivaylo Petrov
- Re: [core] [netmod] 🔔 admin WG Last Call of COREC… Ivaylo Petrov