Re: [core] Barry Leiba's No Objection on draft-ietf-core-senml-etch-05: (with COMMENT)

Ari Keränen <ari.keranen@ericsson.com> Sat, 28 September 2019 19:04 UTC

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From: Ari Keränen <ari.keranen@ericsson.com>
To: Barry Leiba <barryleiba@computer.org>
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Thread-Topic: Barry Leiba's No Objection on draft-ietf-core-senml-etch-05: (with COMMENT)
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Subject: Re: [core] Barry Leiba's No Objection on draft-ietf-core-senml-etch-05: (with COMMENT)
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Thank you for the review Barry!

And sorry for late reply; vacations got on the way.

> On 4 Sep 2019, at 1.32, Barry Leiba via Datatracker <noreply@ietf.org> wrote:
> 
> Barry Leiba has entered the following ballot position for
> draft-ietf-core-senml-etch-05: No Objection
[...]
> ----------------------------------------------------------------------
> COMMENT:
> ----------------------------------------------------------------------
> 
> It's a small thing, and not worth putting in as a DISCUSS, but please DO make
> this change: Please change the registration templates in Sections 6.2 and 6.3
> to accurately match the template in Section 5.6 of RFC 6838. Thanks.

I double checked the registration template and fixed two things:
* Using "N/A" instead of "none"
* Added: "Deprecated alias names for this type: N/A"

The registration templates in the draft also have "Macintosh Universal Type Identifier code" that is not part of the RFC6838 template but that is defined instead of the Macintosh file type code(s) similar to SenML RFC. I assume that is OK.

The changes are reflected in this PR:
https://github.com/core-wg/senml-etch/pull/12/files 

If these changes address your concerns and there are no further comments, I'll include this PR in the next revision.


Thanks,
Ari