Re: [core] [CoRE] Working Group Last Call (WGLC) of draft-ietf-core-target-attr-01

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From: Thomas Fossati <Thomas.Fossati@arm.com>
To: Marco Tiloca <marco.tiloca=40ri.se@dmarc.ietf.org>, "core@ietf.org" <core@ietf.org>
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Subject: Re: [core] [CoRE] Working Group Last Call (WGLC) of draft-ietf-core-target-attr-01
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Hi Marco, all,

The document is in great shape (*), all seems very reasonable and well thought out.
I support moving it forward – and adjusting the registrations depending on the relative speed of the OSCORE drafts.

Cheers, thanks!

(*) Apart from a couple of editorial nits in the Introduction:
- The redundant “(Please see abstract.)”
- A not very well anchored parenthetical “(See also Section 2, Paragraph 2.)” that’s not clear about what the reader is expected to find in the referenced text.



On 14/02/2023, 11:22, "core" <core-bounces@ietf.org> wrote:

Dear all,

This email starts a Working Group Last Call for the document:

https://www.ietf.org/archive/id/draft-ietf-core-target-attr-01.html
(CoRE Target Attribute Registry)

The document status can be found at:
https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-core-target-attr/

Please provide your comments and feedback by Tuesday, 2023-02-28 to core@ietf.org<mailto:core@ietf.org> or, exceptionally, to core-chairs@ietf.org<mailto:core-chairs@ietf.org>.
Having the feedback on the mailing list will allow us to discuss the results at the CoRE interim meeting on 2023-03-01.

Note that it may be the easiest way to submit editorial nits etc. as pull requests at the working group repository https://github.com/core-wg/core-target-attr

Best,
/Marco


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