Re: [core] I-D Action: draft-ietf-core-sid-20.txt

There are a couple of missed edits in this version:

    Items introduced by a new revision of a YANG module are added to the
    list of SIDs already assigned.  When this is done development of a
    new protocol document it may be necessary to make provisional
    assignments.  They may get changed, revised or withdraw during the
    development of a new standard.  These provisional assignments are
    marked with a status of "unstable".  When the specification is
    advanced to a final document, then status of the assignment is marked
    with the module-revision (a YYYY-MM-DD) when the assignment is
    finalized.

typo:

    s/withdraw/withdrawn/

The last sentence needs to change since the revision date is not saved:

old:

    the module-revision (a YYYY-MM-DD) when the assignment is
    finalized.

suggested new:

      a status of "stable".

Andy

On Wed, Mar 1, 2023 at 5:34 AM <internet-drafts@ietf.org> wrote:

>
> A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts
> directories.
> This Internet-Draft is a work item of the Constrained RESTful Environments
> WG of the IETF.
>
>         Title           : YANG Schema Item iDentifier (YANG SID)
>         Authors         : Michel Veillette
>                           Alexander Pelov
>                           Ivaylo Petrov
>                           Carsten Bormann
>                           Michael Richardson
>   Filename        : draft-ietf-core-sid-20.txt
>   Pages           : 46
>   Date            : 2023-03-01
>
> Abstract:
>    YANG Schema Item iDentifiers (YANG SID) are globally unique 63-bit
>    unsigned integers used to identify YANG items, as a more compact
>    method to identify YANG items that can be used for efficiency and in
>    constrained environments (RFC 7228).  This document defines the
>    semantics, the registration, and assignment processes of YANG SIDs
>    for IETF managed YANG modules.  To enable the implementation of these
>    processes, this document also defines a file format used to persist
>    and publish assigned YANG SIDs.
>
>
>    // The present version (-20) is intended to address all IESG
>    // feedback.  It has significantly progressed from -16, which was the
>    // original submission to the IESG.
>
>
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