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Daniel Migault <daniel.migault@ericsson.com> Wed, 12 April 2017 01:33 UTC

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Looks fine to me. 
Yours, 
Daniel

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Subject: Re: [Curdle] draft-ietf-curdle-ssh-curves-01 

Daniel Migault <daniel.migault@ericsson.com> writes:

> Please find my comments on the current version of the draft. These are 
> mostly nits, and I think we can move that draft forward.
> 
> Yours,
> 
> Daniel
> 
> Abstract
> 
>    How to implement the Curve25519 and Curve448 key exchange methods in
>    the Secure Shell (SSH) protocol is described.
> 
> MGLT:
> 
> This document describes the conventions for using Curve25519 and 
> Curve448 key exchange methods in the Secure Shell (SSH) protocol.

MDB: Change adopted.

> 1.  Introduction
> 
>    In [Curve25519], a new elliptic curve function for use in
>    cryptographic applications was introduced.  In [Ed448-Goldilocks] the
>    Ed448-Goldilocks curve (also known as Curve448) is described.  In
>    [RFC7748], the Diffie-Hellman functions using Curve25519 and Curve448
>    are specified.
> 
> MGLT: I think we shoudl rephrase the text above or remove it.

MDB: Removing the paragraph seems okay to me. The references to RFC7748 and the [Curve25519] and [Ed488-Goldilocks] will be moved into the next place they are referenced.

I will also change the draft from "info" to "std" category per your previous private message.

Are there any other suggested change before I publish the -02 revision?

	-- Mark

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