[Curdle] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-curdle-cms-eddsa-signatures-06

Jouni Korhonen <jouni.nospam@gmail.com> Sun, 23 July 2017 20:41 UTC

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Reviewer: Jouni Korhonen
Review result: Ready

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Document: draft-ietf-curdle-cms-eddsa-signatures-??
Reviewer: Jouni Korhonen
Review Date: 2017-07-23
IETF LC End Date: 2017-07-25
IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat

Summary: Ready to ship. Good that Proto Write-up took care of explaining
downrefs.

Major issues: None.

Minor issues: None.

Nits/editorial comments:  I just have one question whether the use of RFC2119
language in Section 5 Security Considerations is intentional? I mean here that
sometimes e.g. "must" is in lower case and sometimes other keywords are in
upper case e.g. "SHOULD NOT".