Re: [Curdle] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-curdle-ssh-kex-sha2-14

Ron Frederick <ronf@timeheart.net> Mon, 15 February 2021 20:34 UTC

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From: Ron Frederick <ronf@timeheart.net>
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Date: Mon, 15 Feb 2021 12:34:34 -0800
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Subject: Re: [Curdle] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-curdle-ssh-kex-sha2-14
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Hi Mark,

A couple of minor issues with the recommended text (grammatical, not technical):

On Feb 15, 2021, at 10:54 AM, Mark D. Baushke <mdb=40juniper.net@dmarc.ietf.org> wrote:
> Suggestion to the reviewer of replacement paragraphs before the table in
> section 4 "Summary Guidance for Key Exchange Method Names Implementations"
> 
>     [snip]
>    It is suggested that the MUST NOT key exchange method code be
>    removed from the any implementations using them.

This should be “from any” instead of “from the any”.

>    The Implement column is the current recommendations of this RFC. Key
>    Exchange Method Names are listed alphabetically. This is ordering is
>    not intended to be the order used in either the server or client
>    negotiation lists.

This should be “This ordering is” instead of “This is ordering is”.
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Ron Frederick
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