[Curdle] Éric Vyncke's No Objection on draft-ietf-curdle-ssh-ed25519-ed448-09: (with COMMENT)

Éric Vyncke via Datatracker <noreply@ietf.org> Wed, 07 August 2019 06:42 UTC

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Subject: [Curdle] Éric Vyncke's No Objection on draft-ietf-curdle-ssh-ed25519-ed448-09: (with COMMENT)
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Éric Vyncke has entered the following ballot position for
draft-ietf-curdle-ssh-ed25519-ed448-09: No Objection

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Thank you for this short document. I have one COMMENT and a couple of NITs
though (minor and trivial to fix)

=== COMMENT ===

--- Section 2.1 ---
Please use RFC 8174 boilerplate.

=== NIT ===
The "Ed25519" is capitalized in section 1 and all uppercase in section 7.

Section 8 would benefit for editorial review regarding the use of ':' and
starting sentence with a capitalized word.