Re: [Curdle] [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-curdle-cms-eddsa-signatures-06

Alissa Cooper <alissa@cooperw.in> Wed, 11 October 2017 19:28 UTC

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From: Alissa Cooper <alissa@cooperw.in>
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Subject: Re: [Curdle] [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-curdle-cms-eddsa-signatures-06
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Jouni, thanks for your review. Russ, thanks for your response. I have entered a No Objection ballot.

Alissa

> On Jul 23, 2017, at 4:41 PM, Jouni Korhonen <jouni.nospam@gmail.com> wrote:
> 
> Reviewer: Jouni Korhonen
> Review result: Ready
> 
> I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area
> Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed
> by the IESG for the IETF Chair.  Please treat these comments just
> like any other last call comments.
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> Document: draft-ietf-curdle-cms-eddsa-signatures-??
> Reviewer: Jouni Korhonen
> Review Date: 2017-07-23
> IETF LC End Date: 2017-07-25
> IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat
> 
> Summary: Ready to ship. Good that Proto Write-up took care of explaining
> downrefs.
> 
> Major issues: None.
> 
> Minor issues: None.
> 
> Nits/editorial comments:  I just have one question whether the use of RFC2119
> language in Section 5 Security Considerations is intentional? I mean here that
> sometimes e.g. "must" is in lower case and sometimes other keywords are in
> upper case e.g. "SHOULD NOT".
> 
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