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Re: [Curdle] Genart last call review of draft-schaad-curdle-oid-registry-02

Rob Stradling <rob.stradling@comodo.com> Mon, 16 October 2017 09:20 UTC

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Subject: Re: [Curdle] Genart last call review of draft-schaad-curdle-oid-registry-02
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On 16/10/17 08:13, Roni Even wrote:
<snip>
> Nits/editorial comments:
> 
> 1. Add a sentence to the RFC editor to remove the "Contributing to this
> document " section 2. The document is missing a table of content 3. In the
> acknowledgment section the sentence "This document stole  text heavily from a
> previous document doing
>     similar thing by Russ Housely" is not clear, do you hint that Russ also
>     stole?  I think better wording "This document uses a lot of text from a
>     similar document  by Russ Housely"

s/Housely/Housley/

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