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Re: [Curdle] [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-schaad-curdle-oid-registry-02

Alissa Cooper <alissa@cooperw.in> Thu, 25 January 2018 01:59 UTC

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From: Alissa Cooper <alissa@cooperw.in>
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Subject: Re: [Curdle] [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-schaad-curdle-oid-registry-02
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Roni, thanks for your review. Authors, thanks for your responses. I have entered a No Objection ballot.

Alissa

> On Oct 16, 2017, at 3:13 AM, Roni Even <ron.even.tlv@gmail.com> wrote:
> 
> Reviewer: Roni Even
> Review result: Ready with Nits
> 
> I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area
> Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed
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> Document: draft-schaad-curdle-oid-registry-??
> Reviewer: Roni Even
> Review Date: 2017-10-16
> IETF LC End Date: 2017-10-23
> IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat
> 
> Summary: The document is ready for publication with nits as an Informational RFC
> 
> Major issues:
> 
> Minor issues:
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> Nits/editorial comments:
> 
> 1. Add a sentence to the RFC editor to remove the "Contributing to this
> document " section 2. The document is missing a table of content 3. In the
> acknowledgment section the sentence "This document stole  text heavily from a
> previous document doing
>   similar thing by Russ Housely" is not clear, do you hint that Russ also
>   stole?  I think better wording "This document uses a lot of text from a
>   similar document  by Russ Housely"
> 
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