Re: [Curdle] Genart last call review of draft-schaad-curdle-oid-registry-02

Jim Schaad <ietf@augustcellars.com> Mon, 16 October 2017 13:27 UTC

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From: Jim Schaad <ietf@augustcellars.com>
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Subject: Re: [Curdle] Genart last call review of draft-schaad-curdle-oid-registry-02
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> -----Original Message-----
> From: Roni Even [mailto:ron.even.tlv@gmail.com]
> Sent: Monday, October 16, 2017 12:13 AM
> To: gen-art@ietf.org
> Cc: curdle@ietf.org; ietf@ietf.org; draft-schaad-curdle-oid-
> registry.all@ietf.org
> Subject: Genart last call review of draft-schaad-curdle-oid-registry-02
> 
> Reviewer: Roni Even
> Review result: Ready with Nits
> 
> I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review
> Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for
> the IETF Chair.  Please treat these comments just like any other last call
> comments.
> 
> For more information, please see the FAQ at
> 
> <https://trac.ietf.org/trac/gen/wiki/GenArtfaq>.
> 
> Document: draft-schaad-curdle-oid-registry-??
> Reviewer: Roni Even
> Review Date: 2017-10-16
> IETF LC End Date: 2017-10-23
> IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat
> 
> Summary: The document is ready for publication with nits as an Informational
> RFC
> 
> Major issues:
> 
> Minor issues:
> 
> Nits/editorial comments:
> 
> 1. Add a sentence to the RFC editor to remove the "Contributing to this
> document " section 2. The document is missing a table of content 3. In the
> acknowledgment section the sentence "This document stole  text heavily
> from a previous document doing
>    similar thing by Russ Housely" is not clear, do you hint that Russ also
>    stole?  I think better wording "This document uses a lot of text from a
>    similar document  by Russ Housely"

1.  There is an XML comment in the document source asking that it be removed.
2.  Due to the shortness of the document, a TOC is not required.
3.  Done.

Jim