Re: [dane] I-D Action: draft-ietf-dane-registry-acronyms-03.txt
Olafur Gudmundsson <ogud@ogud.com> Wed, 22 January 2014 00:56 UTC
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Viktor, On Jan 16, 2014, at 10:41 PM, Viktor Dukhovni <viktor1dane@dukhovni.org> wrote: > On Thu, Jan 16, 2014 at 03:49:43PM -0500, Olafur Gudmundsson wrote: > >>> - s/confused as what/confused as to what/ >>> - s/column with acronym/column with an acronym/ >>> >> Fixed > > While you're still taking fixes of this sort: > > diff --git a/draft-ietf-dane-registry-acronyms-03.xml b/draft-ietf-dane-registry-acronyms-03.xml > index b75515a..27d1d66 100644 > --- a/draft-ietf-dane-registry-acronyms-03.xml > +++ b/draft-ietf-dane-registry-acronyms-03.xml > @@ -38,9 +38,9 @@ > <workgroup>DANE</workgroup> > > <abstract> > - <t>Experience has show that people get confused using the three > - numeric fields the TLSA record. This document specifies > - descriptive acronyms for the three numeric fields in the TLSA > + <t>Experience has shown that people get confused using the three > + numeric fields in the TLSA record. This document specifies > + descriptive acronyms for the three numeric fields in TLSA > records. > This document updates the format of the IANA registry created by RFC6698. > </t> This looks good I will propose that we apply it, before the document pops out as an RFC. > @@ -50,11 +50,12 @@ > <middle> > <section title="Introduction"> > <t> During discussions on how to add DANE <xref target="RFC6698"/> > - technology to new protocols/services people repeatedly have > - got confused as what the numeric values stand for and even > - the order of the fields of a TLSA record. > - This document updates the IANA registry definition for TLSA > - record to add a column with acronym for each specified field, in order to reduce confusion. > + technology to new protocols/services people have repeatedly > + been confused as what the numeric values stand for and even > + the order of the fields in a TLSA record. > + This document updates the IANA registry definition of the TLSA > + record to add a column with an acronym for each specified field, so > + as to reduce confusion. > This document does not change the DANE protocol in any way. > </t> > <t>It is expected that DANE parsers in applications and DNS Same here, > @@ -168,8 +169,8 @@ > <section title="Acronym use in a specification example:"> > <t> > Protocol FOO only allows > - TLSA records using PKIX-EE and DANE-EE, with selector SPKI and > - using SHA2-512. </t> > + TLSA records using PKIX-EE(1) and DANE-EE(3), with selector SPKI(1) and > + using SHA2-512(2). </t> > <!-- <t> Sides example: "In the case of FOO for practical cases you > can treat PKIX-CA == DANE-TE" (see talk at IETF-87 on DANE for > email) </t> --> Much better > @@ -185,7 +186,7 @@ > <section title="Acknowledgements"> > <t>Scott Schmit offered real good suggestions to decrease the > possibility of confusion. Viktor Dukhovni provided comments > - from expert point of view. Jim Schaad, Wes Hardaker and Paul > + from an implementor's viewpoint. Jim Schaad, Wes Hardaker and Paul > Hoffman provided feedback during WGLC. > </t> > </section> > -- Same here > Viktor. Thanks for suggestions. Olafur > _______________________________________________ > dane mailing list > dane@ietf.org > https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/dane
- [dane] I-D Action: draft-ietf-dane-registry-acron… internet-drafts
- Re: [dane] I-D Action: draft-ietf-dane-registry-a… Warren Kumari
- Re: [dane] I-D Action: draft-ietf-dane-registry-a… Stephen Farrell
- Re: [dane] I-D Action: draft-ietf-dane-registry-a… Olafur Gudmundsson
- Re: [dane] I-D Action: draft-ietf-dane-registry-a… Viktor Dukhovni
- Re: [dane] I-D Action: draft-ietf-dane-registry-a… Olafur Gudmundsson