Re: [Dcrup] [taugh.com-standards] [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-dcrup-dkim-crypto-12

Alissa Cooper <alissa@cooperw.in> Thu, 21 June 2018 14:25 UTC

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Cc: Pete Resnick <presnick@qti.qualcomm.com>, General Area Review Team <gen-art@ietf.org>, dcrup@ietf.org, draft-ietf-dcrup-dkim-crypto.all@ietf.org, rsalz@akamai.com, Murray Kucherawy <superuser@gmail.com>, alexey.melnikov@isode.com, ben@nostrum.com, Adam Roach <adam@nostrum.com>, Alexey Melnikov <aamelnikov@fastmail.fm>, fenton@bluepopcorn.net
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> On Jun 20, 2018, at 3:38 PM, John R. Levine <johnl@iecc.com> wrote:
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>> Pete, thanks for your review. I think the whole point of chartering DCRUP was to produce documents such as this.
>> John, thanks for updating to reference RFC 8174, although I agree with Adam that the boilerplate should match 8174.
> 
> It's fixed in the copy I have here, waiting to see what other nits to fix show up in LC before posting the final.
> 
> By the way, there are comments in the XML pointing out the stuff to remove, which have been there all along.

Ok. I don’t read the XML when doing my IESG reviews.

Alissa

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> R's,
> John